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ON WRITING

 

This page deals primarily on the writing of books. 
If you're interested in my advice on writing comics, go here.

"Tradition needs storytellers."
- Dave Kindred

So you want to be a writer, and you would like to know if I have any advice.

I sure do. My own and other people’s.

First, be prepared to commit a great deal of time learning how to write and selling what you write:

"It takes a long time to learn how to write. Most of the writers I deal with spent somewhere between ten and fifteen years learning to write and establishing themselves before their work even began to sell. At the World Science Fiction Convention this year (1986), I looked around and realized that all the hot young writers were at least thirty-five years old." [Alan Rodgers, "Putting It on the Editor’s Desk", How To Write Tales of Horror, Fantasy & Science Fiction, p. 147]

Second, if you want to earn your living writing, be patient:

"Except for a very few, a solid writing career usually arrives later in life." [John Jakes, "To Be a Writer: What Does It Take?", Writer’s Handbook 1987, p. 11]

Third, you should be fascinated about writing. Not only about the craft of writing, but about what others writers write and how they write:

"From that moment my career was decided: I felt that the special call which is sent to every man had come to me, then; I felt a confidence which has never failed me. Nevertheless I did not disguise from myself the difficulties which such a life-work would involve. I knew that above all other professions this one demanded deep and special study, and that, to operate with success upon living life, I should first need to study `dead nature’ long and earnestly. Shakespeare, Corneille, Calderon, Goethe, and Schiller—I laid their works before me, like on the surgeon’s table, and with scalpel in hand, long nights through, I probed them to the heart to discover the secret of their life. I saw by what admirable mechanism these authors set the nerves and muscles of their creatures moving and working, and noted with what skill they clothed and re-clothed with different flesh that framework which was always the same." [Alexandre Dumas, quoted by H.A. Spur in The Life and Writing of Alexandre Dumas, p. 23]

Fourth, be prepared to write your own stories in your own style:

"I should like to define style in a somewhat different way. The object of language is to convey thought and feeling from one mind to another without loss of moving power. Style, as it seems to me, is that form into which one may case his conception with reasonable confidence that because of this form his conception will be able to operate without friction, i.e., without loss of power. If in mechanics force be applied in an improper way, either the work will not be done at all, or, if done, will be accomplished only with great waste of energy. If style is adequate, the idea will have free play, and will even gain in power to move." [Nelson Glenn McCrea, "Literature and Liberalism", Literature and Liberalism, p. 16]

Fifth, if you want to be a writer, go on and get writing:

"If you have a story that seems worth telling, and you think you can tell it worthily, then the thing for you to do is tell it." [Dashiell Hammett, source lost]

Finally, when all is said and done, there remains the mantra of all artists: "Practice. Practice. Practice." Well, that, and this pearl of wisdom, which is still the best advice I have ever heard for beginning writers. It comes from two very popular authors, Clive Cussler and Robert Louis Stevenson:

  1. Cussler: "Copy."
  2. Stevenson: "Damn it, it’s the only way."

Writing teachers howl at this advice. They insist that new writers avoid imitating other writers so they can develop a unique "voice" or what McCrea called "style." I am not arguing that a writer must develop a unique style, just not right away.

I am also not suggesting you plagiarize. I am encouraging you to imitate because imitation is the best first way to learn how to do anything. Trust me, if you have talent, your "voice" will naturally develop as time goes by.

Few writing teachers realize that their student will probably be drawn to authors with styles similar to the "voice" the student will develop with experience. Such was the case with H.P. Lovecraft and Lord Dunsany (see T.E.D. Klein’s introduction to Dagon and Other Macabre Tales.  And, if your favorite author also happens to write NY Times bestsellers…well…he must be doing something right! If you’re going to imitate anyone, I say imitate a winner.

Which dovetails with another pearl of wisdom. Stay the heck away from naysayers and other cynics when soliciting advice about writing, or, for that matter, about any endeavor. Never forget that the best advice comes from winners. No one ever succeeded by whining or not trying, so, for the best advice, talk with successful writers. True, cynics are frequently correct, but like Sean Connery said in The Rock: "Losers whine about doing their best while winners [take home] the homecoming queen."

While you are practicing and copying, I cannot overemphasize the importance of following step three above. There is no more exciting way to discover the basics of the writing craft then to read about an author’s life along with how and why that author wrote what he wrote. I recommend any selection from the Twayne Author series as a good place to start.

All right, one last final piece of advice. Perhaps the most important. If any of this prep work sounds like drudgery, then don’t do it. Writing is not fun…unless you love to write, and sometimes not even then. The love of writing should be the sole reason to want to be a writer. You can ignore this or any of my other advice and plug away anyway, but, to quote Edward Van Sloan from the 1931 Frankenstein, "You’ve been warned."

Good luck!

Books
The best books about writing that I have come across are (in no particular order):

If You Want To Write by Brenda Ueland
Ueland, a notable author in her own right, taught writing for several years with the philosophy that, "Everybody is talented, original and has something important to say."

Zen and the Art of Writing by Ray Bradbury
Not your usual how-to book. Unparallel advice about the craft of writing from one of the grand masters.

Screenplay by Syd Field
The basics of filmic writing by a former script reader. Simple and straight forward. Field’s lessons are applicable to fiction writing in all media.

Backstory edited by Pat McGilligan
This series features
interviews with screenwriters beginning with Hollywood’s golden era up through the 1970s. While some interviews, particularly those conducted by McGilligan, strain too hard to paint blacklisted screenwriters as persecuted victims, this is nevertheless an excellent series offering something enlightening for the writer or anyone who enjoys good movies.

The Writer’s Handbook
Since sometime back in the 1930s (I believe) The Writer magazine has reprinted selected articles from the previous year’s issues in an annual compendium called The Writer’s Handbook. The Writer is notorious for publishing cookie-cutter articles; nevertheless, the magazine does publish the odd insightful piece by a bestselling author or some lesser-known writer respected in his or her particular genre or medium, and these pieces are the ones that tend to end up in the Writer’s Handbook each year. This makes going down to the library and reading the annual Handbook more cost- and time-effective than subscribing to The Writer. (FYI: Of all the Handbooks I have read, far and away the best edition is the one copyrighted in
1987. Stephen King’s introduction and the articles by Clive Cussler, John Jakes, John D. McDonald, B.J. Chute, and Elizabeth Peters are indispensable reads as far as I am concerned.)

How To Draw Comic Strips For Newspapers and Comic Books!
By Alan McKenzie

The Storytelling Art of the Comic Book Analyzed as the Medium
Approaches a New Golden Age

by R.C. Harvey
For anyone who wants to learn about writing for comics, you cannot do better than kicking off your research with these two books. McKenzie’s book is the best nuts and bolts book about creating (i.e., writing, penciling, inking, lettering, coloring, editing, publishing) comics that I have found. He gives you the big picture. After reading McKenzie, move on to Harvey, who has been analyzing comic book communication better than anyone else for decades. Any book or article by Harvey is worth reading, but this 1996 book is as good as any place to start. One caveat, though, and that is Harvey’s books tend to be difficult to find (this one is published by the University of Mississippi Press). In case you come a cropper, I suggest you then go to any retailer bookstore or comic shop and buy a copy of Scott McLoud’s excellent Understanding Comics.

The Basic Patterns of Plot by Foster-Harris
Read this book before you plot anything. (FYI: For a brief introduction to plots, I recommend visiting http://www.ipl.org/ref/QUE/FARQ/plotFARQ.html.)

Elements of Style by William Strunk, Jr. and E.B. White
Before you read The Basics of Plot, read this book. And, if you don’t already own a copy…why not?

The Chicago Manual of Style from the University of Chicago
Put this beside your dictionary, thesaurus, Information Please Almanac, and CD collection.

AP Stylebook by the Associated Press
Put this beside The Chicago Manual of Style for balance. Essential guidebook for any journalist or any writer who wants to go Hemingway and write like a journalist. (New York Times wannabes excepted, of course.) Also includes a brief but helpful "Briefing on Media Law".

LINKS
Websites I frequent use when looking for work, networking, promoting, or researching.

Looking for Work
CREATIVE MOONLIGHTER
FICTION WRITER’S RESOURCE PAGE
FUNDS FOR WRITERS
WRITER’S MANUAL

Networking
CHICAGO SCREENWRITERS NETWORK
FANTASY WRITERS WANTED
WICKED COMPANY
WORD THUNDER

Promotion
ASPIRING AUTHORS
AUTHOR’S DEN
PUBLISHER’S WEEKLY:

Research/Reference
BABY NAMES BY CATEGORY
CHICAGO PUBLIC LIBRARY’S E-MAIL REFERENCE SERVICE
iTOOLS (RESEARCH IT)
NEWSPAPER LINKS
POPULAR SCIENCE